Another Comma Fault

Longtime readers know that the niggardly use of commas is a pet peeve of mine. Today, I received my November issue of Trains. As usual, I turned immediately to the Commentary page written by Bill Stephens. In his essay, “Railroads’ undoing and evidence of better times,” I encountered this sentence:

Rail service still can’t match trucks and cars still spend too much time sitting.

The sentence stopped me cold. After reading “Rail service still can’t match trucks and cars,” I ran into a brick wall when I saw “still,” at which point the sentence was making no sense. I had to backtrack to figure out that a comma was missing after “trucks.” The compound sentence was not punctuated like one and was therefore a run-on sentence. What is so annoying in this case is that the phrase “trucks and cars” is a quite natural one, and, lacking a comma, there was no reason to stop after “trucks.” This is a particularly fine example of bad punctuation.