There isn’t much I want to say about “Reciprocity” other than that it would be a mistake to read anything autobiographical into it. The repeated first stanza—inspired by I don’t know what—was written first, and the rest of the poem flowed from those four lines.
Reciprocity
by Lionel Deimel
Would I be happy were I free
Instead of being blue
Because you’re now a part of me,
But I’m not part of you?
We seem to be a perfect pair—
I finish what you say,
I dress to match the clothes you wear,
And ask about your day.
You have so many thoughts to share
And stories to recite;
You awe me with your savoir faire,
Beguile me through the night.
Our music tastes are quite the same;
We often vote alike;
I hate the authors you think lame;
And love to ride your bike.
You sometimes call when you’ll be late,
But sometimes you forget;
You seem untroubled by my wait,
Evincing no regret.
You seem to have some other friends
Whom I have yet to meet;
I have a list of odds and ends
You never can complete.
I’ve learned to like the things you do—
That’s something you’ve not done;
Why can’t you try out something new,
Because I’d find it fun?
Would I be happy were I free
Instead of being blue
Because you’re now a part of me,
But I’m not part of you?
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Beautiful and thoughtful poetry. I love to read poetry and have many books in my personal library. So i must say you have a good sense for poetry. I would love to read more blogs on poetry from you.
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