There isn’t much I want to say about “Reciprocity” other than that it would be a mistake to read anything autobiographical into it. The repeated first stanza—inspired by I don’t know what—was written first, and the rest of the poem flowed from those four lines.
Reciprocity
by Lionel Deimel
Would I be happy were I free 
Instead of being blue 
Because you’re now a part of me, 
But I’m not part of you? 
We seem to be a perfect pair— 
I finish what you say, 
I dress to match the clothes you wear, 
And ask about your day. 
You have so many thoughts to share 
And stories to recite; 
You awe me with your savoir faire, 
Beguile me through the night. 
Our music tastes are quite the same; 
We often vote alike; 
I hate the authors you think lame; 
And love to ride your bike. 
You sometimes call when you’ll be late, 
But sometimes you forget; 
You seem untroubled by my wait, 
Evincing no regret. 
You seem to have some other friends 
Whom I have yet to meet; 
I have a list of odds and ends 
You never can complete. 
I’ve learned to like the things you do— 
That’s something you’ve not done; 
Why can’t you try out something new, 
Because I’d find it fun? 
Would I be happy were I free 
Instead of being blue 
Because you’re now a part of me, 
But I’m not part of you? 
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Beautiful and thoughtful poetry. I love to read poetry and have many books in my personal library. So i must say you have a good sense for poetry. I would love to read more blogs on poetry from you.
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