Facing professional adversity, the injured Pirates third basemen credited his wife, Keli, who he married in the winter, for keeping him grounded.My initial interest in this sentence—the paragraph is only one sentence long—focused on the word “grounded.” Did Keli Alverez keep the ballplayer mentally healthy, or did she keep him from going back to work, possibly against his will? “Grounded” is insufficiently clear.
As it turns out, however, Mr. Sanserio crammed a great number of errors into one sentence. (Does the Post-Gazette employ editors?) For one thing, Alverez is a third baseman, not a third basemen! Finally, “who” should actually be “whom.”
When I get around to it, I may read the rest of the story.
The key is to get this young man healthy and swinging the bat, Lionel. We're going to need him in the line-up through the second half!ReplyDelete
Granted. The Pirates are in a position now where a player like Alvarez could really make a difference.ReplyDelete